So please: Give me lots of negative ratings – thanks in advance!!

I had an idea for an alternate ending as well.

We see the guy running away from the wolf pack and that wild hog and the animals teeth are only inches away from the runner’s legs. We cut to a frontal view as we see the guy smiling. We cut up close to his eyes and he winks to us. He’s got a plan. We switch to a helicopter shot for a brief moment as we see him running away from them. An eagle carrying an american flag passes us by. This might seem a little pretentious but a cool stylistic choice nonetheless. Cut back to a slow motion shot. He jumps incredibly high into the air. We zoom out and see the animals jumping after him. A very epic moment with Lord of the Rings type of music. He lands on the other end, barely. The animals don’t make it because they don’t wear Timberland shoes. They fall deep into the abyss. We cut back to our hero giving us a thumbs up and runs off the screen.

Cut to the logo.

Here’s how I’d have done it.

The bear attacks the runner. The runner wrestles with the bear. Close up shot of runner’s eyes as he’s totally focused on the bear. Zoom out. Runner looking back at the wolves getting closer. Runner takes off shoe and punches the bear in the nose. Cut to close up of the shoe on bear’s nose in slow motion. Cut back to runner putting the shoe back on and running off again.

The rest pretty much as we see here.

this is a conceptually solid and pure piece…no need for mograph icing on this cake.

well done lynn fox.