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Work In Progress: Hello, I-d like a comment on my 2009 reel

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    Hi everyone, this is my new 2009 reel, please have a word about it. www.trimitrimi.com

    • CommentAuthorsanagustin
    • CommentTimeOct 27th 2009
     
    I like your opening titles but the transition into the following piece is a little strange. I'd try doing a camera move rather than a cross dissolve. I would also remove the Kinetic type at 7secs. since it's the weakest piece in the reel. At 20 secs it seems like the animation starts to slow down. I would speed that up because it feels a little drawn out. I mentioned before that you should take out the kinetic type at the beginning I feel like it works at 29sec. Lastly I would speed up the animation at 34secs it's suspenseful with no real pay off. Good reel!
    • CommentAuthortrimitrimi
    • CommentTimeOct 31st 2009
     

    Ehi sanagustin,

    thank you, very helpfull advises. It's always good listen to someone with a fresh look.

    Do u have a reel?

    Cheers

    Sam

     

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    I don't have a reel yet. I do have a video I like critiqued here: http://vimeo.com/7174692

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